篇一:表决心的话

向祖国表决心的话

永远不要低估一颗冠军的心
还是那句老话,有失必有得.仅仅就在四天前,顶着巨大压力冲击首金失败的杜丽还流下了伤心的泪水.今天杜丽同样流泪了,不过这是胜利者开心的泪水,也是杜丽一种情绪的宣泄.
当5天前丢掉万众瞩目的第一枚金牌后,杜丽和在当天同样未能达到人们预期成绩的谭雪等老将一同遭受了巨大非议.但,永远不要怀疑中国运动员的实力,也永远不要怀疑他们那一颗争胜和冠军的心.14日,谭雪率领中国女子佩剑队已经进入了团体决赛,而杜丽在自己的兼项中实现了射击生涯的又一个飞跃.
很显然,杜丽这几天对自己进行了迅速而有效的调整,使得自己摆脱了失败后的懊悔与消极,在仅仅是她副项的3×20的步枪三姿比赛中重新展现了自己的强大实力.
即便只是看这一天的比赛,杜丽也是以一种坚定的“冠军的心”,用一种反弹的方式完成了回归.其实在资格赛中,杜丽的前两组卧射发挥并不算特别出色,仅仅打出99和97环,不过她在随后的立姿和跪姿中迅速找回感觉,并用589环的成绩平了奥运会的该项目预赛纪录,更重要的是,她将主要对手埃蒙斯拉开了3环差距.
而决赛第一枪的8.7环,让杜丽看上去又要重蹈4天前决赛低迷的覆辙,但这已经不是四天前的杜丽.实际上,这一天杜丽在第一枪后就丢掉了领先,而夺冠军团也从古巴人克鲁斯、捷克的克鲁斯再到美国的拜尔勒或是哈萨克斯坦的多夫冈之间不停转换.唯一不变的就是杜丽.在第二枪,杜丽就在第二枪迅速把自己从崩溃的边缘拉了回来,继续着自己对冠军的追逐.最后9枪,杜丽没有一枪低于9.8环,还包括了在关键第8发时的10.8环!
看上去,杜丽在最后几发的从容不迫,也让一度已经紧跟在后面的对手慌了神.克鲁斯在处于领先位置时,第7枪打了9.0环,紧接着,追上来的卡特日娜-埃蒙斯连续交出9.5环和9.6环.最后一发,最接近杜丽的美国人拜尔勒打出8.7环,导致他连奖牌都没有摸着.近身者难以全身而退,这是何等的王者气概!
说这是杜丽对卡特日娜的复仇,有点违背奥林匹克友谊第一的精神,而且她们两人是相当要好的朋友.实际上有这样的一对对手,算是女子步枪界之幸.在这一天,杜丽让这样的抗争关系继续,她已经迅速走出了5天前完败于好朋友的阴影,这是她心理上对自己的又一个超越.北京奥运会总算没有错过杜丽那标志性的笑容.而卡特日娜私下和杜丽交换的小礼物,似乎也是在和杜丽相约：四年后,伦敦再见.

篇二:表决心的话

预先说出的话叫( )言；表示决心的话叫（）言；寓有哲理的话叫（）言

预、誓、寓

篇三:表决心的话

公司组织演讲比赛,求演讲稿结尾有气势、表决心的句子
公司举办演讲大赛,我的结尾有点普通,主题是我爱（公司名）,求结尾表现出有气势、表决心,热爱公司的句子,最好是排比句,有一个很好的结尾,.急用,【表决心的话】

你的魅力就像阿佛洛狄忒,将我深深吸引；你的生命力犹如天神宙斯,所到处生意盎然；你的竞争力是帕拉斯雅典娜,既有战力,又有谋略.我的脉搏为你跳动,我的血液为你流淌,我的神经为你兴奋：我存在,因为你存在.

篇四:表决心的话

帮我写几个含有“言”的词语
1表示决心时说的话
2含有劝诫和教育意义的话
3毫无顾忌地说出来

1表示决心时说的话 ：誓言
2含有劝诫和教育意义的话 ：格言
3毫无顾忌地说出来：狂言、妄言

篇五:表决心的话

急需几篇作文
主题：1 高一的目标和打算
2 给父母或老师的一封信（谈学习计划,表决心）
只要是相关文章都可以.

高一的目标和打算
一个新的学期又要开始了,对那些已经上过一年、两年的学生来说,高中生活不过是继续着原来的有趣或无奈,但对刚刚在不久前经过了中考洗礼的新生来说,高中生活却是一个全新的开始.为什么会这样说呢?
我想现在每一个报名选择了一所高中的学生都已经不止一次地从老爸老妈的口中听到“好好学习、考上大学”的指令与期望了.与初中时相比,高中生活有了更加明确的目标,就是考大学；与初中相比,学习的目的性也更强、更具功利性,就是为以后的人生寻找到一个比较好的起点.而学生自己也要树立起信心,给自己一个明确的目标.
从现在大学录取的实际情况来看,考上大学的几率已经高达百分之六七十,但是,对一个高中生来说,对一个高一新生来说,三年后的几率既不是六十,也不会是七十,只有两个可能：要么百分之百,要么是零.同样是三年的学习,你有什么理由做不到百分之百呢?
陈胜吴广起义时说过一句话：“王侯将相宁有种乎?”我们为什么不问自己一句,那些考上大学、重点大学、名牌大学的同学“宁有种乎?”我怎么就不能考上呢?是不是承认自己比人家笨、比人家蠢?
对一个中考成绩并不太理想的学生来说,经过三年的努力,考上一所理想的大学,绝对不是痴人说梦.
因为,第一点,进入高中,同学们相互之间也许有一定的差别,但这个差别远远没有到可以决定你整个高中阶段学习成绩的程度.无论语数外、理化生、政史地,初中学过的所有知识,在高中阶段几乎都要重新讲过.只要下定决心,坚持不懈、刻苦学习,从现在开始,踏踏实实、脚踏实地地走完高中三年的道路,曾经失去的所有一切不仅可以都弥补回来,而且完全有可能更上一层楼.
第二,与初中阶段相比,不仅仅高中学习的内容变了,比原来更深更难了,无论是语数外,还是理综、文综,都不再局限于拓展知识面、打基础的简单介绍性质,而是学科知识的全面综合与系统化,每一个章节之间的内容都相互联系起来了.更重要的是,对学生的学习心态、学习能力和学习方法提出了全新的要求.
而就这一点来说,所有的高一新生都站在同一个起跑线线上,谁也不比谁落后或领先,关键看学生自己能不能够尽快进入角色,适应高中的学习与生活.更重要的是,能不能从第一天起,就给自己制定一个三年奋斗的目标,然后,坚持到底.
给老师的一封信
亲爱的X老师：
你好：好久没有给你写信了,但这封信已在我心中酝酿了很久.在这学期的学习中,我的学习成绩下降不理想,你那天找我谈话,我才感觉轻松一点,在谈之前,我的自信心太强了,别人问我成就时,我总是回答：“不错,还可以”可我一直不知道,我还没有达到这个程度,以前你给我提意见时,总感觉得有一种从门缝里看人——把人看扁了的感觉,一直觉得你看错了,可是每一次罚作业和考试失败,似乎都在告诉我：“你不如以前啦!”可我总认为一两次算什么,要多次才知道,等到多次以后,我仍然没有变化.
通过那次谈话,我才算认清自己有几斤几两重——缺乏一种冲劲,一种渴望前几名而奋斗的劲,其实,我是比较聪明的人,感觉几年来学习还不错,就放弃对自己的要求,本学期我心理想着要争前几名,可是一直没有冲劲!不明白为什么非要争取到第几名呢?还记得你说：“你妈妈那么优秀,你是教师的儿子,应该为他们树立榜样”我回家同妈妈谈了谈,妈妈非常同意你的说法,并且做起我的思想工作,是啊!我希望你能与我多谈话,找回那冲劲!好吗?
这段时间,我发现自己的脾气大,控制不住要发火,可这几天总是为了为一件很小的事情而急噪,比如上周我误会了曾婷艺,后来我反思许久,是我自己不对,可我也不知道这是为什么?也不知道当时为什么会那么野蛮,所以,我也希望你为我指一条路!回到原来的子腱,好吗?
回家后,我把那句“你伤害了爱你的人!”这句话,反复思考,总算有了答案：把爱我的人的新的伤口,贴上了创可贴.我想行,在给最后一次机会——期末考试中,能给你一个最好的创可贴.
祝你
工作顺利,笑口常开!

篇六:表决心的话

英语作文模式是什么？
老师说英语作文有模式可寻，开始和结尾都是可以套的，请问该套什么？
说点英语作文中常用的句子。

作为应试而言，套句型的确是一个好办法，下面给你一些常用的模式：
作文模板
(i)说明原因型模块 currently, xx has been the order of the day. this does demonstrate the theory －－－ nothing is more valuable than xx it is clear that (1). if you (2), as a result, your dreams will come true. on the contrary, if you (3).failure will be following with you. it turns out that all your plan falls through. no one can deny another fact that (4).you don"t have to look very far to find out the truth, in respect that we all know (5).it will exert a profound influence upon (6).with reference to my standpoint, i think (7).注释:1:xx的第一个优点2:支持xx的做法3:不支持xx的做法4:xx的第二个优点5:举例证明优点二6:说明xx优点三的影响第三天我写的相应作文:
the importance of self－confidence currently, self－confidence has been the order of the day. this does demonstrate the theory －－－ nothing is more valuable than self－confidence. it is clear that (self－confidence means trust in one"s abilities). if you (are full of self－confidence, it will bring your creative power to play, arouse your enthusiasm for work, and help you overcome difficulties), as a result, your dreams will come true. on the contrary, if you (have no confidence in yourself, there is little possibility that you would ever achieve anything ). failure will be following with you。it turns out that all your plan falls through. no one can deny another fact that (self－confidence gives you light when you are in dark and encouragement when you are dismayed).you don"t have to look very far to find out the truth, in respect that we all know (the secret of mme. curie lies in perseverance and self－confidence, the latter in particular). it will exert a profound influence upon (the achievement of one"s ambitions). with reference to my standpoint, i think (he that can have self－confidence can have what he will).
(i)说明原因型模块(2) in recent years, xx has caused a heated debate on (1). the factors for (2).first of all, (3).then, there comes a case that (4). moreover, (5). especially when (6).indeed, these unique points can be collected the remind people that (7).in this way, we should behave just like (8).
the impact of television in recent years, with the development of science and technology, 80 percent of all homes in china have satellite tv, offering as many as 50 channels. it has caused a heated debate on (the impact of television on children). many parents are worried about the impact of so much television on children. the factors for (parents" worry is that children are indulge in television and spend too much time on it.).first of all, (with so many programs to choose from, children are not getting as much exercise as they should ).then, there comes a case that (some studies have show that excessive watching of television by millions of children has lowered their ability to achieve in school ). moreover, (the effect on children"s minds are more serious than the effect on children"s bodies). especially when (the children are too small to judge what programs are suit to them).indeed, these unique points can be connected to remind parents that (they should pay close attention to and responsibilities for supervising their children"s tv viewing).in this way, children will not be influenced too deeply.
(i)说明原因型模块(4)for most of us today, (1). from above, we can find that the reasons why (2)are as follows.the primary reason, i think, is (3).second,(4). the third reason, actually, is (5).the significance for (6)。therefore, (7).注释:(1)人们针对xx的态度和举措(2)归纳现状(3)第一个原因(4)第二个原因(5)第三个原因(6)重申造成现状的最重要原因
pollution most of us today (recognize that environmental pollution has been a greatly serious problem. lots of plants trees corps are destroyed by bad air. many fish die of poisonous water. thousands of people die from eating poisoned fish or breathing in gas. therefore, environmental pollution should be responsible for these diseases that are disabling, or bringing death not only to human beings, but also to wild life.)from above, we can find that the reasons why (environment are polluted more and more seriously)are as follows. the primary reason, i think, is (the reason of harmful substances into environment. for example, to prevent insects, farmers make use of great amounts of insecticides, so as to have bumper harvests. however, they pollute air, water and land ).second,(the gas coming from the car engines and factories also make environment polluted badly ). the third reason actually is (the result of a growing population in the world. everyday, so much litter and waste are poured out from houses, also pollute the environment ). the significance for (controlling pollution) noted that it"s high time that more effective measures should be taken. therefore, (new laws should be passed to limit the amount of pollutants from factories. moreover, in the households, there is an obvious need to reduce litter and waste. let"s make our good efforts, and the world will be a safer place to live for us).
(i)说明原因型模块(5)these days we often hear that (1).it is common that (2). why does such circumstance occur in spite of social protects? for one thing, (3).for another, (4). what is more, since (5),it is natural that (6 ).to solve the problem is not easy at all, but is worth trying. we should do something such as (7) to improve he present situation, and i do believe everything will be better in the future.(1)提出论题(2)说明现状(3)理由一(4)理由二(5)理由三(6)理由三引起的后果(7)解决方法
pollution of environmentthese days we often hear that (our living conditions are getting more and more serious because of the destruction of our environment ).it is common that (many trees and animals are near extinction, and the all－important food chain has been destroyed.).why does such circumstance occur in spite of social protects? for one thing, (the population of the world is increasing so rapidly that the world has been so crowded. ).for another,(the overuse of natural resources has influenced the balance of natural ecology ). what is more, since (the industrial revolution ),it is natural that (a great number of factories have been springing up like mushrooms. the smoke and harmful chemicals released from factories also pollute the environment).to solve the problem is not easy at all, but is worthing. we should do something such as (planting more trees, equipping cars with pollution－control devices and learning to recycling natural resources )to improve the present situation, and i do believe everything will be better in the future.
写作模板——图表式作文 it is obvious in the graphic/table that the rate/number/amount of y has undergone dramatic changes. it has gone up/grown/fallen/dropped considerably in recent years (as x varies). at the point of x1, y reaches its peak value of …(多少). what is the reason for this change? mainly there are … (多少)reasons behind the situation reflected in the graphic/table. first of all, …(第一个原因). more importantly, …(第二个原因). most important of all, …(第三个原因). from the above discussions, we have enough reason to predict what will happen in the near future. the trend described in the graphic/table will continue for quite a long time (if necessary measures are not taken括号里的使用于那些不太好的变化趋势).
写作模板——提纲式作文1． 对立观点式 a. 有人认为x 是好事，赞成x， 为什么？b. 有人认为x 是坏事， 反对x，为什么？c. 我的看法。 some people are in favor of the idea of doing x. they point out the fact that 支持x 的第一个原因。they also argue that 支持x 的另一个原因。however, other people stand on a different ground. they consider it harmful to do x. they firmly point out that 反对x 的第一个理由。 an example can give the details of this argument: there is some truth in both arguments. but i think the advantages of x overweigh the disadvantages. in addition to the above－mentioned negative effects it might bring about, x also may x 的有一个坏处。
2． 批驳观点式 a．一个错误观点。 b． 我不同意。 many people argue that 错误观点。by saying that, they mean 对这个观点的进一步解释。an example they have presented is that 一个例子。(according to a survey performed by x on a group of y, almost 80％ of them 赞成这个错误观点或者受到这个错误观点的影响)。 there might be some element of truth in these people’s belief. but if we consider it in depth, we will feel no reservation to conclude that 与错误观点相反的观点。there are a number of reasons behind my belief. (以下参照辩论文的议论文写法)。
3． 社会问题(现象)式 a．一个社会问题或者现象b． 产生的原因 c．对社会和我们生活的影响 d． 如何杜绝。(如果是问题的话)e． 前景的预测。 nowadays, there exists an increasingly serious social/economic/environmental problem. (x has increasingly become a common concern of the public). according to a survey, 调查内容说明这种现象的情况。(或者是一个例子)。 there are a couple of reasons booming this problem/phenomenon.下面参照辩论式议论文写法。 x has caused substantial impact on the society and our daily life, which has been articulated in the following aspects. 参照辩论式议论文的写法。 a dozen of measures are supposed to take to prevent x from bringing us more harm. 同上based on the above discussions, i can easily forecast that more and more people will ……..
辩论式议论文模版1 some people believe (argue, recognize, think)that 观点1. but other people take an opposite side. they firmly believe that 观点2. as for me, i agree to the former/latter idea. there are a dozen of reasons behind my belief. first of all, 论据1. more importantly, 论据2. most important of all, 论据3. in summary, 总结观点. as a college student, i am supposed to 表决心.或:from above, we can predict that 预测.
模版2 people hold different views about x. some people are of the opinion that 观点1, while others point out that 观点2. as far as i am concerned, the former/latter opinion holds more weight. for one thing, 论据1.for another, 论据2. last but not the least, 论据3. to conclude, 总结观点. as a college student, i am supposed to 表决心. 或 from above, we can predict that 预测.
模版3 there is no consensus of opinions among people about x(争论的焦点)。some people are of the view that 观点1，while others take an opposite side, firmly believing that 观点2。as far as i am concerned, the former/latter notion is preferable in many senses. the reasons are obvious. first of all, 论据1。 furthermore, 论据2。among all of the supporting evidences, one is the strongest. that is, 论据3。 a natural conclusion from the above discussion is that总结观点。 as a college student, i am supposed to 表决心. 或 from above, we can predict that 预测.
1.写作模板——图表式作文
It is obvious in the graphic/table that the rate/number/amount of Y has undergone dramatic changes. It has gone up/grown/fallen/dropped considerably in recent years (as X varies). At the point of X1, Y reaches its peak value of …(多少).
What is the reason for this change? Mainly there are … (多少) reasons behind the situation reflected in the graphic/table. First of all, …(第一个原因). More importantly, …(第二个原因). Most important of all, …(第三个原因).
From the above discussions, we have enough reason to predict what will happen in the near future. The trend described in the graphic/table will continue for quite a long time (if necessary measures are not taken括号里的使用于那些不太好的变化趋势).
2.写作模板——提纲式作文
1． 对立观点式
A．有人认为X 是好事，赞成X， 为什么？
B． 有人认为X 是坏事， 反对X，为什么？
C．我的看法。
Some people are in favor of the idea of doing X. They point out the fact that 支持X 的第一个原因。They also argue that 支持X 的另一个原因。
However, other people stand on a different ground. They consider it harmful to do X. They firmly point out that 反对X 的第一个理
由。 An example can give the details of this argument: 一个例子。
There is some truth in both arguments. But I think the advantages of X overweigh the disadvantages. In addition to the above-mentioned negative effects it might bring about, X also may X 的有一个坏处。
2． 批驳观点式
A．一个错误观点。
B． 我不同意。
Many people argue that 错误观点。By saying that, they mean 对这个观点的进一步解释。An example they have presented is that 一个例子。（According to a survey performed by X on a group of Y, almost 80% of them 赞成这个错误观点或者受到这个错误观点的影响）。
There might be some element of truth in these people’s belief. But if we consider it in depth, we will feel no reservation to conclude that 与错误观点相反的观点。There are a number of reasons behind my belief. (以下参照辩论文的议论文写法)。
3． 社会问题（现象）式
A．一个社会问题或者现象。
B． 产生的原因
C．对社会和我们生活的影响
D． 如何杜绝。（如果是问题的话）
E． 前景的预测。
Nowadays, there exists an increasingly serious social/economic/environmental problem. (X has increasingly become a common concern of the public). According to a survey, 调查内容说明这种现象的情况。（或者是一个例子）。&nb
There are a couple of reasons booming this problem/phenomenon. 下面参照辩论式议论文的写法。
X has caused substantial impact on the society and our daily life, which has been articulated in the following aspects. 参照辩论式议论文的写法。
A dozen of measures are supposed to take to prevent X from bringing us more harm. 参照辩论式议论文的写法。
Based on the above discussions, I can easily forecast that more and more people will ……..
3.写作模板——辩论式议论文
模版1
Some people believe (argue, recognize, think) that 观点1. But other people take an opposite side. They firmly believe that 观点2. As for me, I agree to the former/latter idea.
There are a dozen of reasons behind my belief. First of all, 论据1.
More importantly, 论据2.
Most important of all, 论据3.
In summary, 总结观点. As a college student, I am supposed to 表决心.
或 From above, we can predict that 预测.
模版2
People hold different views about X. Some people are of the opinion that 观点1, while others point out that 观点2. As far as I
sp;am concerned, the former/latter opinion holds more weight.
For one thing, 论据1.
For another, 论据2.
Last but not the least, 论据3.
To conclude, 总结观点. As a college student, I am supposed to 表决心.
或 From above, we can predict that 预测.
模版3
There is no consensus of opinions among people about X（争论的焦点）。Some people are of the view that 观点1，while others take an opposite side, firmly believing that 观点2。As far as I am concerned, the former/latter notion is preferable in many senses. The reasons are obvious.
First of all, 论据1。
Furthermore, 论据2。
Among all of the supporting evidences, one is the strongest. That is, 论据3。
A natural conclusion from the above discussion is that总结观点。
As a college student, I am supposed to 表决心.
或 From above, we can predict that 预测.

篇七:表决心的话

动宾,动补,偏正,主谓
一、打篮球.
二、热爱科学.
三、了解透彻.
四、坐好.
五、学得怎麽样?
六、看一次.
七、学习书法.
八、学得不错.
九、表决心.
十、飘来一只纸船.
第一题的短语是什麽关系?(理解句子)
甲.动宾关系.
乙.动补关系.
丙.主谓关系.
丁.偏正关系.
2.第二题是动宾短语,宾语是哪个?(理解句子)
甲.「热爱」.
乙.「科学」.
丙.「爱」.
丁.「学」.
3.第三题是什麽短语?(认读文字)
甲.动宾短语.
乙.宾补短语.
丙.动补短语.
丁.形补短语.
4.第四题的短语中的「好」字的作用是什麽?(理解句子)
甲.是「坐」的宾语.
乙.是「坐」的主语.
丙.是补充说明「坐」得怎麽样.
丁.是补充说明「坐」在哪里.
5.第五题的短语是什麽关系?(理解句子)
甲.动补关系.
乙.主谓关系.
丙.偏正关系.
丁.动宾关系.
6.第六题短语中的「看」和「一次」的关系是什麽?(理解句子)
甲.「看」是动词,「一次」是介词,是动补关系.
乙.「看」是动词,「一次」是数量词,是动补关系.
丙.「看」是动词,「一次」是数量词,是动宾关系.
丁.「看」是动词,「一次」是介词,是动宾关系.
7.第七题的是什麽短语?(理解句子)
甲.动补短语.
乙.主谓短语.
丙.动宾短语.
丁.并列短语.
8.用符号表示第八题的短语的关系,应该选择下列哪一项?(理解句子)
甲.学 / 得不错.
乙.学得不/ 错.
丙.学得 / 不错.
丁.学 / 得不 / 错.
9.第九题的短语是什麽关系?(理解句子)
甲.主谓关系.
乙.介宾关系.
丙.动宾关系.
丁.动补关系.
10.第十题的短语是动宾关系,它的宾语是哪个?(理解句子)
甲.「飘来」.
乙.「一只」.
丙.「纸」.
丁.「一只纸船」.

动宾结构是语法里的知识
短语根据成分的不同分好多结构,就拿你说的动宾结构为例吧
动,指的是动词,比如吃,提出,打扫等都是动词
宾,指的是宾语,在一个短语或者一句话里,跟在动词或者形容词后边的成分叫宾语,宾语通常有名词或者形容词充当.比如高,米饭,意见,伟大,雄伟等等.
那动宾结构就是这两个成分组在一起的短语或者句子就是动宾结构.比如吃米饭,提出意见,打扫教室,等等好多.
明白了吗?
下面我给你出几个,你判断一下:
回答问题 雄伟壮丽 跳舞 展示才华 迎风飘扬
不明白再问我!
如果你很满意俺的答复,希望能给我加分的奖励!呵呵!

篇八:表决心的话

诗文读后感【表决心的话】

[诗文读后感]诗文读后感心中,思念的泪——《听听那冷雨》读后感
初次认识余光中先生,是初中时读他的《乡愁》,那首软绵绵的诗“ 小时候,乡愁是一枚小小的邮票,我在这头,母亲在那头,诗文读后感.长大后,乡愁是一张窄窄的船票,我在这头,新娘在那头.后来呵,乡愁是一方矮矮的坟墓,我在外头,母亲在里头.而现在,乡愁是一湾浅浅的海峡,我在这头,大陆在那头.”至今,我都记忆犹新.
为什么呢,为什么对久远的尘封记忆如此清晰呢,我想,是因为每个人心中都有一缕淡淡的乡愁吧.如今,再次与余光中先生对话,再次尝试走进他的内心世界.
文章一开头就写淋淋沥沥的雨,这场绵长的雨即使在梦中也不曾停止过.你是否想过逃避这场冷雨,但是,“而就凭一把伞,躲过一阵潇潇的冷雨,也躲不过整个雨季.连思想也都是潮润润的.”是啊,我们不是常说,逃避得了一时,逃避不过一世吗.或许说,这场冷雨是你心底久违的盼望.“不过那—块土地是久违了,二十五年,四分之一的世纪,即使有雨,也隔着千山万山,千伞万桑二十五年,一切都断了,只有气候,只有气象报告还牵连在一起,大寒流从那块土地上弥天卷来,这种酷冷吾与古大陆分担.不能扑进她怀里,被她的裾边扫一扫吧也算是安慰孺慕之情.”你写这段话,是想说什么呢?我想,你是把满腔思念注入文字中吧.你久违的土地,是否也在等着你.
“听听,那冷雨.看看,那冷雨.嗅嗅闻闻,那冷雨,舔舔吧那冷雨.”这雨在你心里不是无形的,它有生命,有味道,有气息.我想,舔着那冷雨,该是一股咸咸的苦涩味,因为你远离那土地太久了.“雨是女性,应该最富于感性.”这场冷雨更像是一个女性在用哀怨的声音诉说着什么.在那片土地上,应该有你的亲人,有你的爱人,更重要的是,土地上有你的魂,有你的跟,你的血液里流淌着母亲的液汁.“雨打在树上和瓦上,韵律都清脆可听.”你听着淅沥的雨声,心情是否也随着韵律高低而起伏不定.我喜欢听雨打在瓦砖上的声音,城市里的雨打在玻璃上,那声音也够清脆,但始终缺少韵味.
你在日式的古屋听黄梅雨,听秋雨,该是多么惬意,但还是少了一种东西.雨是记忆彼端的开始,你想念的是在哪里听雨呢.是故土吧,最后你回到的那片土地,回到思念已久的大陆.我想问,你会带着愉悦的心情去听听下一场暖雨吗?【扩展阅读篇】
读后感,顾名思义,要先有\"读\",而后才有\"感\"可言,它将阅读与写作紧密地联系在一起.在日常生活中,我们阅读了一篇文章、一本书、一首诗 而后将自己的感受、心得、体会写下来形成文字,就是读后感.
注意点：
1、吃透文义.写读后感之前,索要写的对象文章或者书籍要读透,找出自己感受最深的地方.如果读不透,写的时候就会东一句,西一句,不知所云.
2、是自己在写读后感,是自己的感受或者感悟.千万不要说教别人,令人味同嚼蜡.我看过一个孩子的读后感,从头到尾除了概括引用原文之外,就是在对别人指手画脚,搞了很多名言名句镶嵌其中,满以为光彩夺目,实则堆砌材料.让人不愿意读下去.这是很多孩子写作的共性.
一、首先了解\"经典式\"读后感的结构模式
读后感也离不开\"读\"--对原文的引述、概括、评价等等,离不开\"感\"--自己的感想、观点、看法,\"读\"与\"感\"之间,还要有\"感点\"前后衔接,读后感《诗文读后感》.因此,读后感的中心一般结构模式可以如下图所示：
述读(前提)
发感(论证)
感点(桥梁)
结感(升华)
在这个结构模式中,\"感点\"是关键,没有了感点,读后感也就失去了灵魂,也就无所谓\"读后感\".感点,就是你读后最有感受的地方或者点.
在整篇文章中,感点在\"述读\"与\"发感\"之间起着桥梁的作用,是结构全文的纽带.\"感点\"承接\"述读\".读后感的写作,必须是先\"读\"而后\"感\",不\"读\"则无\"感\",\"读\"是\"感\"的前提和基础,\"感\"是\"读\"的延伸或结果.\"感点\"也领起\"发感\",它是发感的依据.发感必须围绕感点展开论述,对感点发表自己的看法、感受,以议论为主,突出一个\"感\"字.\"结感\"收束全篇,升华感点,是\"感\"的归宿.
注意：很多孩子的读后感,复述完故事内容,就开始写感,翻来覆去,就几句话,就是多写一点,也是不着边际,一盘散沙,主要是缺乏\"感点\"这个桥梁,显得很突兀,过度不自然,不顺畅.
二、掌握\"经典式\"读后感的写法
第一步：拟主标题,这一部很重要.很多孩子直接写《 xx》读后感,别人读的时候就引不起兴趣,会想到这样没有主题的读后感会不会浪费时间呢?如果有了一个非常醒目的标题,就会让人有一种乐于阅读的心思.所以,虽然也可以不要主标题,但是我还是建议拟主标题.过江龙进来的文章都学会了拟主标题,如：《爱是战胜邪恶的天然屏障--读《哈里.波特与魔法石》有感 》、《拥有一颗平常心--读《查理和巧克力工厂》有感》、《谦虚功的基石-读《谦以行善,金榜提名》有感 》等等.
标题是文章的眼睛,眼睛醒目,就像一个人拥有一双明亮的大眼睛一样,先是好看了三分呢.
注意点：标题一定要高度浓缩你的感悟心要.不要泛泛而写,一定要结合感点,否则会弄巧成拙,贻笑大方.
第二步：述读--引
讲述：在通常情况下,要围绕感点,引述材料.就是围绕感点,有的放矢地简述原文相关内容.写这部分内容就是为了交代感想从何而来,并为后文的议论作好铺垫.
注意点：1、在述读这一部分,引述原文要精简,不能大段大段地叙述所读书籍、文章的具体内容.
2、对于原文的述读,材料精短的,可以全文引述;
3、篇幅较长的,只能够是简述与感点有直接关系的部分,而与感点无关紧要的部分只能是忍痛割爱了.
4、\"述读\"材料要精简、准确、有针对性,这是读后感成功的第一个需要注意的地方.
5、良好的开端等于成功的了一半.这一部分如果拖沓冗长或者与主题不相符,就会让人反感.
第三步：感点--议
议,就是紧承前一段\"述读\"所引述的材料,针对材料进行评析,既可就事论事,对所\"引\"的内容作一番分析;也可以由现象到本质,由个别到一般的作一番挖掘;对寓意深的材料更要深入剖析,然后水到渠成地\"亮\"出自己的感点,也就是中心论点.
注意点：感点的提出,要有与之相关的所读材料.如果没有述读的这部分材料,感点就是无源之水,流而不远;感点也只能是空发议论,泛泛而谈.所以,不管述读在感点之前,还是在感点之后,首先要有述读的存在,其后才能有感点的成立
第四步：发感--联
\"发感\"就是对\"感点\"--中心论点--进行论证.这一部分是读后感的主体部分,是对感点的阐述,通过摆事实、讲道理证明感点的正确性,或正面论、反面证证明感点的合理性.
注意点：1、所摆的事实、所讲的道理都要围绕感点来展开,而不能游离于感点之外.也就是你选的例子和所讲的道理和感点要有共鸣,不能另立一个论点.否则,就会不知所云,下笔千言,离题万里.有一些孩子在联系实际的时候,所选的题材和 感点貌似相似,仔细一对比,表达的思想不一样,这样就让读者看不明白你在说什么了,切忌.
2、发感还要联系实际,深入论证.联系实际,既可以由此及彼地联系现实生活中相类似的现象,也可以由古及今联系现实生活中的相反的种种问题,有时候还可以是个人的思想、言行、经历.
3、联系实际,要有针对性,必须紧扣感点,而不能泛泛而谈,不能脱离感点随意联想,不着边际.
第五步：结感--结
结感就是收束全文,既可以回应前文,强调感点;也可以提出希望,发出号.
注意点：1、不管怎样结尾,都要与前面的几个部分构成一个有机整体,不能是横空出世,说一些不着边际的话.表决心式的结尾也行,但是容易落入俗套,有虎头蛇尾的感觉.
2、要结得自然,顺理成章收束全篇.或发人深思,或气势磅礴,或首尾呼应,暗合标题,都不失精彩.

篇九:表决心的话

高中英语万金油句子

你要名言名句 还是作文万能句型?作文句型这里有很多：
辩论式议论文
模版1
Some people believe (argue,recognize,think) that 观点1.But other people take an opposite side.They firmly believe that 观点2.As for me,I agree to the former/latter idea.
There are a dozen of reasons behind my belief.First of all,论据1.
More importantly,论据2.
Most important of all,论据3.
In summary,总结观点.As a college student,I am supposed to 表决心.
或 From above,we can predict that 预测.
模版2
People hold different views about X.Some people are of the opinion that 观点1,while others point out that 观点2.As far as I am concerned,the former/latter opinion holds more weight.
For one thing,论据1.
For another,论据2.
Last but not the least,论据3.
To conclude,总结观点.As a college student,I am supposed to 表决心.
或 From above,we can predict that 预测.
模版3
There is no consensus of opinions among people about X（争论的焦点）.Some people are of the view that 观点1,while others take an opposite side,firmly believing that 观点2.As far as I am concerned,the former/latter notion is preferable in many senses.The reasons are obvious.
First of all,论据1.
Furthermore,论据2.
Among all of the supporting evidences,one is the strongest.That is,论据3.
A natural conclusion from the above discussion is that总结观点.
As a college student,I am supposed to 表决心.
或 From above,we can predict that 预测.
图表式作文
It is obvious in the graphic/table that the rate/number/amount of Y has undergone dramatic changes.It has gone up/grown/fallen/dropped considerably in recent years (as X varies).At the point of X1,Y reaches its peak value of …(多少).
What is the reason for this change?Mainly there are … (多少) reasons behind the situation reflected in the graphic/table.First of all,…(第一个原因).More importantly,…(第二个原因).Most important of all,…(第三个原因).
From the above discussions,we have enough reason to predict what will happen in the near future.The trend described in the graphic/table will continue for quite a long time (if necessary measures are not taken括号里的使用于那些不太好的变化趋势).
提纲式作文
1． 对立观点式
A．有人认为X 是好事,赞成X,为什么?
B． 有人认为X 是坏事,反对X,为什么?
C．我的看法.
Some people are in favor of the idea of doing X.They point out the fact that 支持X 的第一个原因.They also argue that 支持X 的另一个原因.
However,other people stand on a different ground.They consider it harmful to do X.They firmly point out that 反对X 的第一个理由.An example can give the details of this argument:一个例子.
There is some truth in both arguments.But I think the advantages of X overweigh the disadvantages.In addition to the above-mentioned negative effects it might bring about,X also may X 的有一个坏处.
2． 批驳观点式
A．一个错误观点.
B． 我不同意.
Many people argue that 错误观点.By saying that,they mean 对这个观点的进一步解释.An example they have presented is that 一个例子.（According to a survey performed by X on a group of Y,almost 80% of them 赞成这个错误观点或者受到这个错误观点的影响）.
There might be some element of truth in these people’s belief.But if we consider it in depth,we will feel no reservation to conclude that 与错误观点相反的观点.There are a number of reasons behind my belief.(以下参照辩论文的议论文写法).
3． 社会问题（现象）式
A．一个社会问题或者现象.
B． 产生的原因
C．对社会和我们生活的影响
D． 如何杜绝.（如果是问题的话）
E． 前景的预测.
Nowadays,there exists an increasingly serious social/economic/environmental problem.(X has increasingly become a common concern of the public).According to a survey,调查内容说明这种现象的情况.（或者是一个例子）.
There are a couple of reasons booming this problem/phenomenon.下面参照辩论式议论文的写法.
X has caused substantial impact on the society and our daily life,which has been articulated in the following aspects.参照辩论式议论文的写法.
A dozen of measures are supposed to take to prevent X from bringing us more harm.参照辩论式议论文的写法.
Based on the above discussions,I can easily forecast that more and more people will ……..
数字限制粘贴不了那么多 剩下的你要可以发给你 pdf格式的

篇十:表决心的话

活动结束后,班里决定出一期以“逆境与成功”为主题的黑板报.
其中缺少“卷首语”,如果让你来写,你打算怎样写?（不少于50字）
其实我碰见了好多到这种题目,但总是写不来.

逆境与成功
首先你要阐述成功与逆境的含义,抽象与具体的解释你自己选择
再者就是要多记一些关于这个主题的名人逸事,例如居里夫人,爱因斯坦等等这些耳熟能详的人,相信你也知道一些,都可以用的
说完那些名人逸事之后,你可以从他们身上学到些什么,以及联想自己的现实生活,举一些现当代的名人来做阐述,当然,你要注意语言的组合
最后就是你自己对逆境与成功的理解,自己在现实生活中的逆境与政工的例子,你学到了些什么
结尾就是多写表决心与感悟之类的话
这类命题的作文不外乎上面的写作步骤,百试百灵的!

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