| 书面表达 (本题15分) 近年来中国中学生中出现了“出国留学热”，成千上万的中学生已经去国外学习，而另外的一些学生也一直在设法出国，对此人们有不同的看法。请根据下面表格的提示，以Studying Abroad为题写一篇短文。
注意：1、短文须包括所有要点，内容连贯；2、80词左右，开头已给出（不计入总词数）。 Studying Abroad In recent years, studying abroad has been popular with Chinese high school students. ______________________________________________________________________________________ |
| Studying Abroad In recent years, studying abroad has been popular with Chinese high school students. Thousands of them have gone to foreign countries to study. Many more are trying their best to go abroad. There are many advantages in studying abroad. First, students who study abroad can make friends with people of different cultures. Second, they can improve their foreign languages more quickly. On the other hand, there are some disadvantages. Most of the students are too young to live by themselves without any living experience. And the high cost is also a problem for common families. |
| 这是一篇给材料作文，但是比较简略.要求我们在反映材料内容的同时发挥自己的想象,写出一篇介绍出国留学优缺点的文章.下笔前我们可先设身处地地思考一下如果自己有一个出国留学的机会,自己会怎样,然后再下笔.写作中要注意准确应用时态.同时应注意上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，适当应用连接词,序数词。对于自己没有把握的单词,句式尽量不要用. |
求:英语作文120字
要求：假设你是李华,你的美国朋友David写信询问你高中毕业后是打算出国留学还是留在国内读大学.请根据你的实际情况给予回复,并说明理由
Hello,I"m glad to receive your letters.In the letter,you ask me if I plan to go aboard for further study or just go to a college in my country after graduation of senior school.In my opinion,I prefer not to go aboard so early,that is to say,I"d rather stay in my country.
There are many reasons.The most important is that studying aboard costs a lot,I don"t want to burden my parents with such a sum of money.For the second,I think learning basic knowledges in Chinese university,where the courses are taught in Chinese,is better.It"s too eraly for me to learn only with English.Besides,learning aboard after high school graduation is always what the ones with poor score do,not me.
That"s why I make my choice to stay in China.I hope to hear from you soon.
| 书面表达（本部分1小题，共15分） 近年来, 中国的中学生中出现了“出国留学热”，出国留学也变得越来越低龄化，请你以Studying Abroad为题写一篇短文，词数80。内容包括： 列举出国留学的优缺点各两条； 你认为出国留学什么年龄才合适； 你自己对于出国留学持什么样的态度。 Studying Abroad In recent years, studying abroad has been popular with Chinese high school students, even with junior middle school students. ______________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________ |
| In recent years, studying abroad has been popular with Chinese high school students,even with junior middle school students.As for this, people have different opinions. There are many advantages. First, they can make friends with people of different cultures. Second, they can improve their foreign languages more quickly. Third, they can learn much more knowledge from foreign countries. On the other hand, disadvantages arise. Some students are too young to live by themselves without any living experience. Moreover, being far away from their motherland, they may feel lonely and homesick. And further, the high cost is also a problem for ordinary families. In my opinion, it is advisable to take so many things into consideration .They can ask teachers or students who have studied abroad for advice and they should try to get everything ready before going abroad. |
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对在广大中学生掀起的出国留学热潮，社会有不同的看法。请你根据以下提供的信息，谈谈自己的看法。
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| 本文属于陈述正反方观点的议论文作文，主题是出国留学热潮，给出了大部分要点，就是对出国留学热潮的不同观点，还要考生给出自己的观点。文章结构清晰，先是一些同学认为出国留学热潮有好处的观点，然后是认为有缺点的观点，最后是自己的观点，要求考生用地道的英语表达自己的观点，要求观点明确，驾驭语言的能力强，选择词汇的时候要选择相对高级的词汇，也要运用多种句型，让文章更有变化。难度在于选择合适的词汇和句型表达文章需要的意思，可以变换使用一些容易驾驭的句子或者词汇实现同样的目的。在写作的时候要运用合适的连接词把要点串联起来，使文章成为一个整体。 |
高三英语作文求批改,指导
第一次月考写了这篇作文求有经验的老师们网友们给给意见帮忙批改下.主题是高中生放弃高考去外国留学正反方+自己意见的.作文要求是：1.写信目的2.介绍正反方意见3.自己的观点.其他都没给,希望大家帮我改改指明今后该怎么写好.我是浙江省的.
I am writing to imform you of the result of the discussion of whether students should give up high school extrance examination to study abroad.
60% students are opposite to it,the reason of which is that it is not approriate to go abroad at such a young age.Plus,going abroad means a brand new life,which will surely add to their difficulties.Nevertheless,as far as the rest are concerned,with the knowledge playing an increasingly important role,students should grassip the valuable opportunities to enrich their knowledge.
Personally I agree with the majority.Students going abroad benefit a lot.Besides comprehensive knowledge ,their overall ablilities get improved.It is overall ablilities that count in the present society.
郁闷笔误了应该是百分之40反对谢谢大家了以后尽量简洁
写的挺好的,我高中时候写不出你这么好的作文.说几点不足的地方吧.
1 the result of the discussion of whether students should give up high school extrance examination to study abroad. 可以改成 the discussion result of whether students should give up college entrance examination to study abroad. 这样句子会简练一些.
2 60% students are opposite to it, the reason of which is that it is not approriate to go abroad at such a young age. Plus, going abroad means a brand new life, which will surely add to their difficulties可以改成 60% of students could not agree with it because high school students are too young to adapt oversea lives which are full of challenges and difficults.在这里,because 表因为要比 as a result of 好一些,还有,连接2个句子一般不用plus这个词.
3 as far as the rest are concerned 可以改成 rest of us believed 简单明了些吗,哈哈.
4 with the knowledge playing an increasingly important role 可以改成due to the increasing role of knowledge. 这里有一个因果关系的,所以用due to 会好点.with 表伴随关系.
5 我不明白你最后几句话啊,你既然都同意多数人的观点了,为什么后面还说出国读书的好处啊?
加油!
追逐梦想的日子 作文 求新作【高中生出国留学条件】
在追逐梦想的日子里
我没有特殊的天赋,常常怀疑自己的智商不如别人.然而,我却有着与别人一样的梦想_____中学毕业后,考上大学,大学毕业后,找个好工作.将来有条件时,出国留学,学成后报效祖国.可别笑我不自量力,我可是个不轻言放弃的人.我正在付诸行动,我每天都在为追逐梦想而艰苦奋斗.
我从一个小学生成长为一个中学生,书包背破了一个又一个,也经历了一次又一次的考试,并常常迷失在考试的胡同里.所幸的是,我似乎已经习惯了学生生活的紧张与辛苦.每天夜阑人静,家人早已好梦沉酣时,我依然捧着厚厚的书本,依然为一大堆尚未完成的作业而冥思苦想,依然为第二天的考试而忘我备战……
有时,对着如梦的星空,我会突发奇想,觉得自己像个负重的石匠,正在独木桥上颤悠悠地晃动着,可就是没有掉下去.渐渐的,我明白了成长的沉重与艰辛：甜美的果实来自现实的苦涩萌芽,伟岸的松柏永远植根于现实的土壤.
面对厚厚的书本,成堆的作业,无尽的考试,我已习以为常,我相信自己一定会勇于负重,一定会从“山重水复疑无路”走到“柳暗花明又一村”.
此刻在灯下埋头苦读的就是我.妈妈挂在窗前的风铃叮叮当当的响,它在我平静的心湖荡开一道道水纹.我好想溜出去找个网吧,与网友QQ,好想约几个同龄人,一起放声歌唱,好想洗个热水澡,提前去睡个痛快觉……然而这一切都已经显得过于奢侈.我毕竟早已不是那个翻墙摘果子,趟河摸田螺,袖口擦鼻涕的孩童了,我正在追逐我的梦想.我不能不压抑自己的情绪,不能不放弃许多眼前的欲望,不能不远离享受而选择奋斗!
时光无法停滞,青春不能挥霍,为了让好梦成真,我一定要乘风破浪,把握今日,我必须在我的脚下留下一串串坚实的脚印.
桌上放着一盏台灯,台灯旁是一堆书,虽然生活在向我招手,但梦想还没有实现,我正处在追逐梦想 的日子里,所以认真读好书,才是我此刻责无旁贷的任务.
天,澄明圣洁的天,像一方浅蓝色的丝帕；云,洁白无瑕的云,像舒卷的轻纱；风,无忧无虑的风,掀起了阵阵金色的麦浪,泼洒着灿烂的希望.一个小男孩,站在田埂上,放飞了他的纸飞机.飞机乘风而翔,他欢呼着,蹦跳着,使劲地挥着双手.这就是儿时的哥哥.折飞机、放飞机是他童年最大的乐趣.虽然他没有抒发过做飞行员、制造飞机的壮志,但他却一次次专注地折着纸飞机.他仰起头,望着自己的纸飞机在天空飞翔,努力睁大眼睛,情不自禁地微笑着.哥哥一定有一个深藏在心底的梦——渴望飞翔,渴望在蓝天里编织理想的梦.
哥哥就这样用稚嫩的小手折叠他童年的梦想.可是,不曾有一双温柔的大手去轻轻抚慰他纯真的梦.一次,哥哥兴冲冲地捧起一只刚折好的纸飞机跑进屋子,“妈,这只飞机飞得可高啦.来,我表演给你看!.”他想拉着母亲往外跑.“别胡闹,我正忙着呢.”母亲甩开他的手,“你呀,都上小学了,还老玩这些没用的飞机,还不快做作业去!”“早做完了.”哥哥脸上的笑容顿时消失了,抬头望了望满脸不高兴的母亲,转身一步步向外走去.好几次,他望着手中的纸飞机,又停下来回头注视母亲,眼睛里充满了委屈和失落.这是一只多么好的纸飞机呀,妈妈只要看一眼就会非常喜欢的,可刚才她却没有瞧上一眼.
这样的故事重复了许多次,哥哥每次都是兴高采烈地跑去,却又都是垂头丧气地回来.渐渐地,哥哥变得沉默了.他经常一个人坐在田埂上,时而仰起头,望着自己的纸飞机在田野上空游动着,轻滑着,飞舞着；时而又低着头,陷入沉思,想着他一直解不开的疑惑.他折的飞机渐渐少了,终于有一天,他的飞机全部落下了.我问他为什么,他只是摇头不答.是因为真的长大了吗?我不知道.我只知道没有人仔细地欣赏过他的纸飞机,没有人抚摸着他的头说：“孩子,你真行.”没有人试着叩开他的心扉,倾听他的诉说……
猛然间,我想起眼前的纸飞机,急忙四处寻找.只见它被牢牢地困在一个树杈上,无力飞翔
我有无数的梦想.
很小的时候,自己很想当一名画家.于是,我才不理睬妈妈的强烈反对,在家里雪白的墙上涂鸦着.尽管,会有我的“欣赏者”指着我画的太阳说,“哇,这是瓢虫吧,画得真好!将来肯定能当个画家!”两三年之后,不知道为什么,我放弃了.
三年级的时候,刚刚开始写作文,清楚地记得一次老师夸我作文写得好之后,我的梦想改为了当一名作家.于是,我向着我的梦想出发.我写着,改着,最后投稿,再之后收到“谢谢参与”.一切仿佛都是上天安排的,每一次都重复着同一过程,同一结果.于是,我,厌倦了.
差不多六年级的时候,我又有了新的梦想,想当一名服装设计师,也许只是觉得这个职业很有意思吧.凭着我画画的“良好”功底和我与生俱来的设计“天赋”,我的设计搞得到了家人的好评.可当我拿着我的设计稿到同学那里炫耀时,他们的直言不讳让我的心一下子冷了.一次次地冷嘲热讽,使我的纸篓里多了一个又一个纸团.这个梦想又被我放弃了.
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似乎,我追逐的梦想有无数多个.在追逐梦想的日子里,我收获了什么?
我幻想着：如果当初我能坚持画画儿,也许我就可以在同龄人中被佩服得五体投地；如果我能坚持投稿,也许我至少可以在某个报刊的某个角落拥有一个属于我的小方块；如果我能坚持设计,也许我就可以得到家人真心地赞扬……可是,一切都已经都过去了,没有汗水的追梦,没有坚持的追梦,不会得到梦想成功时刻的辉煌与欣喜.
人,为何追梦?只为梦想成功?否!那追梦过程中的酸甜苦辣,那梦醒时分的点滴领悟,才是人类真正向往拥有的.在追逐梦想的日子里,我收获了很多很多……
读《我是中国人》有感
教室里安静极了,头顶的风扇不停地转动,发出“吱吱呀呀”单调的声音,可此时此刻我的心却像波涛汹涌的大海,千丝万缕复杂的情感涌上心间,在这张已被我填满的考试卷上,令我激动不已的是那一篇小小的短文《我是中国人》.我不禁又细细地品读了一下这篇文章：“我”是一个在美国留学的中国学生.在平时,“我”总是向别人介绍我的祖国,并且在下课时,时常到黑板上写一些介绍中国文化传统的短文.经过“我”的努力,终于在年段大测验中获得了连美国人也很少获得的好成绩,“我”为自己的祖国感到骄傲.
读完文章,我掩卷沉思,中国这个矗立在世界东方的大国,又何尝不是我的骄傲呢?文章的字里行间中所体现出来的不光是一颗火热的赤子之心,更是世界拥抱中国的缩影.而“我是中国人,我很自豪”这几个字更是不断扣动我的心弦,它在我的脑海中不断放大,像放电影般一遍又一遍地闪过,我不禁觉得热血沸腾……
我陷入了沉思,记忆的旋涡又将我拉到了另一篇文章上：一个高中生到外国留学,他作为高才生被美国的一家有名的企业破格录用,虽然工资十分丰厚,但条件是必须长期呆在美国.这位留学生毅然拒绝了这家公司的工作,他在家书中写到：“就算在外国做再好的工作,也顶多算一个二等公民,我要回到抚育我成长,给我锻炼机会的祖国!”,这一段激昂的文字,震撼了我的心灵,这字里行间所体现出来的爱国精神,难道称不上崇高吗?这两篇文章的作者的经历是如此相似,但更相似的是那爱国心!
“来到异国他乡,思乡的感情会变得特别强烈.”这不正是心灵的呼唤吗?那些挤破头皮想要出国的人,眼睛是否已经被那成捆的美钞和华丽的别墅蒙蔽了,他们看不到中国进步的步伐.而我却总相信,无论何时何地,长江和黄河总能奏出中华儿女的灵魂之声!
| 目前高中学生出国留学(study abroad)是一个普遍的社会现象。假定你是某中学的学生李华，你的美国朋友Jim想要了解人们对此现象的看法。请你根据下面的要点提示，用英语给他写一封信，告诉他人们的不同看法，并谈谈你自己的观点。要点： 1.赞同（学好英语、旅游、独立……） 2.反对（沟通困难、自理能力差、孤独……） 3.你的观点…… 注意：1.词数100左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.开头语已为你写好，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, I am glad that you have an interest in this phenomenon. With more and more high school students choosing to study abroad, people’s views on the trend are divided. Best regards, Li Hua |
| One possible version: Dear Jim, I am glad that you have an interest in this phenomenon. With more and more high school students choosing to study abroad, people’s views on the trend are divided. Many students and education agencies advocate its advantages. They claim that studying abroad can not only help students learn English well, but also provide them with good opportunities to travel around the English-speaking countries and start to live an independent life. On the other hand, many others have a negative attitude. They believe that lots of students studying abroad are actually suffering from the difficulties in communication, which in turn makes them lead a lonely life. What’s worse, some students lack the skills in looking after themselves. Personally, I prefer students to study abroad after receiving their bachelor’s degrees at home, because it is the necessary life skills and higher English level that guarantee a successful study. Best regards, Li Hua |
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