4级作文多少分
楼主您好,
满分105分,一般来说只要你写了,即使内容不堪入目甚至直接抄的阅读,只要书写好一点,60到70分稳妥到手.
望采纳!
四连级作文
捉虫子 中午,爸爸正在摆弄着他那心爱的葡萄树,我在一旁看着爸爸.
“冲冲,你过来,给你看样东西.”说着,爸爸从地上葡萄树下捡起一个黑色的小东西.我觉得好玩,便走了过去,好奇地问：“爸,这是什么呀?”
“哈哈,不知道了吧,”他笑了笑,把那个黑色的小东西挪到我眼前,小声地说：“这是一种虫子的排泄物.”
听罢,我下意识地向后退了两步.心想：什么呀,爸爸也真是的.因为好奇,又迅速凑了上去,准备和爸爸抓住那个害虫.
捕虫行动开始啦.听爸爸说,这种虫子很狡猾,经常趴在葡萄叶子的背面.我按照爸爸说的去做,半天没有找到一个虫子.我心里有点疑惑,爸爸是不是说错啦,这样做,根本就找不到虫子嘛.
爸爸似乎看透了我的心思,又对我笑了笑.我更疑惑啦,难道是我做错啦?
爸爸没说一句话,只见他先找到那个黑色小东西落下来的位置,顺着它向上找.他好像找见了什么,将手放在那片葡萄叶的茎部,用力一折,我过去一看,果然有一个肉嘟嘟的虫子在叶子的背面趴着.它是绿色的,和叶子样色相仿.怪不得我刚才找不见呢!
可是爸爸的寻找速度也太快了吧!什么原因呢?我仔细想了想,就是不明白.正当我百思不得其解之时,还是那个所谓虫子的排泄物提醒了我,爸爸就是根据他来判断虫子的大概位置.哦,我恍然大悟.
看来做什么都需要正确的方法呀!【4级作文】
请高手帮忙修改一篇4级作文,并评价指正,
For this part,you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay entitled "On Students Selecting Lecturers".You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below:
1有些大学允许学生选择某些课程的任课老师
2学生选择老师时所考虑的主要因素
3学生自选任课教师的益处和可能产生的问题
On Students Selecting Lecturers
As is known to us all that students nowadays are allowed to select some of their courses and lecturers in universities.Faced with so many choices,what factors do undergraduates take into consideration?
To my point of view,there are three reasons,simple but thought-provoking.One of which is the experiences and the qualification of the lecturer.A full teacher or an associate teacher,the title could greatly influence students" choices because it reflects a teacher"s reputation and capacity to a certain extent.In the second place,the time of different courses may differ.Therefore,in order to be in accordance with the time of other major subjects,we have to give up some minor subjects notwithstanding we"d like to choose them.Last but not least is whether the course is easy enough for students to pass the final exam in that different teachers have different demands on students.
With regard to this issue,I reckon that we can organize our own time,choose a teacher who is appropriate to us,and take up a course in which we take an interest by selecting the lecturers by ourselves.Surely,there are also some disadvantages by contrast,such as students don"t emphasize on what they can learn from the lecturers,but on what grade they can get from the lecturers.Hence,university should play an important role in dealing with it.
① As is known to us all that students nowadays are allowed to select
此句中,that应该去掉,再加“逗号”!因为As is known to us all是一个定语从句.
如果你想保留that,应该把As改为形式主语It!
② One of which -- One of them 这里不是定语从句
③ A full teacher or an associate teacher, the title -- The title of a full teacher or an associate teacher,
此处不改的话,不通顺!
不合逻辑
④ Last but not least is whether the course is easy enough for students to pass the final exam in that different teachers have different demands on students.
此句中,Last but not least 不能作为主语!
改为：Last but not least, whether the course is easy enough for students to pass the final exam is what they should take into consideration in that different teachers have different demands on students.
⑤ by contrast, such as students don"t ...
such as最好改为for example
⑥ Hence, university should －－－ Hence, universities should
把university改为复数为妙! 因为可数名词要么加a,要么用复数!
总体评价：
条理清楚,思维清晰,词汇丰富.该生潜力无穷!如果文中少些语法错误就完美了.建议：以后多看《21世纪报》,学会并运用“用地道英语思维”!
祝你进步!
请高手修改并评价这篇4级作文,
For this part,you are allowed 30minutes to write a short essay entitled Recreational Activities.You shoul write at least 120 words following the outline given below.
1娱乐活动多种多样
2娱乐活动可以使人们受益,也可能带来危害
3作为大学生,我认为.
Recreational Activities
In colleges,especially in Chinese colleges,students get freedom from the more fraternal,more relaxing,and more harmonious atmosphere.In their spare time,lots of recreational activities are available.For instance,sports,club activities,computer games,trips are all students" favorite activities.
However,when we find out some advantages about recreational activities,I reckon that there are some disadvantages about recreational activities as well.To begin with,playing computer games do a lot of harm to students.Independent as they are,teachers and parents cannot intervene profoundly in their daily life,which will result in students" lack of concentration on their study.Subsequently,many club activities seem to be a waste of time.Many activities just focus on getting together and going ouside the campus to have a meal.Scarcely can they make progress from this kind of activities.Moreover,going on a trip to somewhere else is a good idea,but who guarantees the safety of the students as quite a few cases show that students in campus are more liable to have an accident while going on a trip.
As a college student,I think that we should consider the problem in a provident way.Recreational activities can just be used for relaxation out of study time,but not to be addicted to them and not to abuse them.
开头的introduction部分过于简单,而且没有引-限-点.建议楼主使用复杂些的表达法,因为开头非常重要!中间的body部分内容充实,不过似乎楼主侧重于叙述disadvantage了,advantage的部分字数不太够,可以再充实一些.最后的summary还是简单,应该复杂些.记住,四级作文第一位的是语言,尽量做到词汇丰富,多用从句,或是独立主格等语法,这样才能让判卷老师印象深刻.要知道,他们看一篇作文的时间平均不到1分钟,一定要做的impressive!写好开头!
祝你成功~~加油O(∩_∩)O~
还有1周就4级考试了.请高手帮我修改一篇4级作文,并评价指正,
For this part,you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitiled Spring Festival Gala on CCTV.You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below.
1许多人喜欢在除夕观看春节联欢晚会
2有些人却提出取消春节联欢晚会
3在我看来.
Spring Festival Gala on CCTV
Every year when the Spring Festival sets in,many people prefer to watch the spring festival gala on cctv.Faced with different kinds of programmes,they can not only have a relaxing and amusing time,but also enjoy the harmoniousness with their family members.From this perspective,watching the spring festival gala on cctv can bring a lot of good to us.
In contrast,some people reckon that we should cancel the programme.These are some of the reasons,simple but thought-provoking.In the first place,they think that the spring festival eve is a chance for people to communicate with their family members.After one year"s work,study,or some other things,it is necessary to have a chat with them.Only if we get together can we enjoy our time.Subsequently,some people assume that the programmes in the spring festival gala are some stereotypes.As time goes by,seldom do we see some changes in the programmes.
In dealing with this issue,I believe that we should take one"s preference into consideration.After all,the spring festival gala is the most prevalent programme on spring festival eve.Millions of people watch it.Hence,I recommend that we should watch it.Surely,it is another choice that no sooner does it begin,than you start to do other things.
另外感觉这个话题不好写,自己感觉写得很烂,请根据我的文章给些好的建议和表达法
每一篇作文都会给一些要求句,把这些句子翻译出来作为主题句,然后扩展它.
如：“许多人喜欢在除夕观看春节联欢晚会” 开头可以写“As we can see, more and more people prefer to watch the Spring Festival Gala with their family on the night before Spring Festival " 然后扩展就好,可以举例子,字数有限,注意把握,不宜太长.
最后提出自己观点时最好加一句"as far as i am concern……或as a collage student, i think……“
多看看范文,找点常用的好句型.
最后祝你能去的好成绩!
请高手帮忙修改指正这篇4级作文,并帮忙评价与打分,
For this part,you are allowed 30minutes to write a short essay entitled Free admissions to the museums.You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below.
1越来越多的博物馆现在免费向公众开放,目的是.
2有人认为这样做会带来一些问题
3在我看来
Free Admissions to Museums
As far as I know,nowadays more and more museums become free for the public.
To my point of view,there are two main reasons.On the one hand,this behavior correspond to the government"s cultural policies,which require people to behave oneself,open up one"s mind,and make further development into knowledge.On the other hand,the profits should also be taken into consideration.If the museums are not free for the public,seldom do people visit museums,that means the museums become useless when people get free admissions to the museums,museums can not only obtain reputation,but also sell some souvenirs to people in order to get profits for maintaining the operation of the museums and the staff.
Some other people may pose some problems to it.Topping the list is that if museums are free,will there be too many people?Besides,selling souvenirs may not work well.Therefore,without the income of the tickets,how can the museums earn enough money to maintain themselves?
For dealing with these problems,I reckon that the museums can reduce the price of the ticket,but not to make it free for the public.Only in this way can the museums give a better environment to the visitors and earn enough money for the maintenance.
写的真不错【4级作文】
4级作文满分几分?我同学有115分呐?到底几分是满分?
如题
在你的成绩报告单上是看不到具体作文成绩的
因为写作成绩包括作文和翻译分数之和
作文是15% 也就是106.5 翻译是5% 也就是35.5
加起来写作一共是142分
一共3篇小作文,4级水平的
1.有一种观点认为:城市生活比乡村生活好
2.你对这种观点的看法
3.你的结论
1.你最喜欢的电视节目是什么
2.你喜欢它的理由
3.做出结论
it is necessary to keep a balanced diet
should
it is important to do regular exercises
ti is essential to keep in good spirits/in a positive mood
renew our spirits and release our stress
Be bound to keep healthy
How to keep healthy
暂时只有20分了,我有了分会在加上的谢谢!
As is known to us all,there are two areas in a country.One is the city,the other is athe country.
Many people prefer living in the city than in the country.To be honest,living in the city really has its own advantages.For example,in the city there are many shops where we can buy almost everything we need for daily life.The substances in the city is better than those in the country.The residents are richer,have many activities to do in their spare time.
However,I think living in the country is much better.In the country,the air is fresher.You can see many kinds of aminals.Besides,on holidays,you can see the green crops.If the wind blows,the crops will swing.How beautiful it is.In addition,many people who live in the city like to go to the country to live.The country is poor,but it has its own beauty.
四级作文117算高不?满分多少啊?
满分129分,你的作文写的挺好的,分数算比较高的了.我上次作文只考109,
想请会的人帮忙批改一下四级作文,谢谢
这是自己写的一篇四级作文想请有能力的人帮忙批改一下,谢谢
Volinteers Needed
Boys and girls please pay your attention to this imformation. Our school"s student union is going to organize a activity and you will as a volunteer join us .we are looking for volunteer and we hope you can take part in this activity when we take vocation.
We arrange this activity not only let we to do some meaningful things but also it will exercise our compentency . If you take part in this activity you can harvest a lot of experiences. It meaningful for us to do work in the future. We will to help lonely old people and wash away those bad adversary on the wall and so on.
If you want to join us please call me :135168. We are looking forward to you can join us ,we welcome every body.
第一段第二句我觉得可以写成 The student union of our school will organize an activity in recent days and you can join us as volunteers.第二段第一句 This activity will not only let you do something meaningful but also extend your compentency.有一些语法错误,比如 will ,let 后面是要跟原形的,不加to 多用一些短语,比如If you want to join us=If you have an intention to join us 希望这些能对你有用,继续加油吧~
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